Final remarks
After all, this is my first book on QRead, so I’ll just write a few words of thanks. Life needs some sense of ritual!
The early results of this book are pretty good.
My readers should be able to tell that I am a true fan of Mebius.
Because it's obvious, or is it obvious to me?
The protagonist's cheat code is to get rewards by killing monsters.
But in the content of chapters 23 to , even though there were monsters, I let the protagonist deliberately not kill them, but gave them to Xiao Meng to train.
This is contrary to the golden finger and is a fatal point.
Because I think Mebius is a growth-type Ao, his strength is not achieved overnight, but gradually.
If the protagonist had cleared all the enemies, Xiao Meng would not have been able to achieve the subsequent achievements.
There is no way his bond with GUYS could be that deep.
The previous part about Mebius is about feeling good about yourself.
However, after more than 30 chapters, when the Mebius storyline was over, the transitional plot of returning to the Kingdom of Light was not well written.
Or maybe the anticipation was gone, so I ended up writing it poorly.
This resulted in the data being halved within a week.
Reflected in terms of income, it means a full one-third reduction...!
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The subsequent writing was actually quite smooth, and I kept writing along the main line I had thought of before.
I have been learning continuously in the meantime, so friends who have been following it should be able to feel it clearly.
The writing style of the content from 40 to 100 is obviously different from that of 1 to 40.
But as I was learning, I lost some of my own things, and the process was not as fun as what I wrote before. This is a very profound lesson.
And I also suffered from the literary youth syndrome. In a sense, I was quite satisfied with the two chapters I wrote about Xiao Meng's theory of longevity.
Is it considered making dumplings just for this plate of vinegar?
But judging from the data, people don’t really like this style of writing.
Also, chapters 38 and 39, the two chapters about Torrekia, are also full of literary youth syndrome.
So I won’t write this kind of article anymore, and just write about what I’m good at.
Then... in Chapter 100, it's time to look for the Eternal Core and start writing the story of the world of Triga.
But I haven’t seen Triga, why?
It was so awkward that I couldn't bear to watch it anymore. I was overwhelmed by the awkwardness after watching the second episode.
So I forced myself to finish watching Triga, and also watched a lot of videos complaining about the plot of Triga.
I made my second mistake here. I brought my emotions into the book.
Criticizing Smailu, Criticizing Jian Wu, Criticizing the embarrassing plot, etc...
Although Triga is OK, Triga is really not OK.
(Kusiya Naoki's pure GZZ, the script is not as good as the suit actors, it's amazing.)
As a result, the content of chapters 101 to 108 does not seem to be written by the same person as the previous ones. I have to express my feelings, but it is a pity for the readers.
To put it bluntly, everyone is watching you interact with the mysterious four Olympians or popular characters.
I want to see you defeat all your enemies and travel around the world.
I'm not looking at you complaining here.
I have already complained about it in my mind, or I have seen it in the video, so there is no point.
The pace of society today is very fast, everyone is under a lot of pressure, and the burden on their shoulders is not light.
Reading novels is to release stress and gain emotional value, rather than adding to one's irritability.
So... in the Triga chapter, half of the readers were poisoned again, and the writing failed for the second time.
(But the good news in the bad news is that the Triga chapter in the other book is going very smoothly...)
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Originally, I could have written this book for another month, but now that the data has hit rock bottom, I have lost motivation.
So let’s just end it. The ending was thought of a long time ago, but a lot of the story lines in the middle were omitted.
For example, the legendary enemies that Cyrus defeated in the Dark Lucifer Universe.
Each one of them could be used to write a 3-5 chapter story, but I just let Cyrus kill them instantly.
I planned the length of the chapters according to the improvement in strength. These enemies are all opponents at the "legendary" level.
According to the original outline, it is impossible for the ending to be just defeating Arc Belia, so...
I personally feel very sorry.
I used a small account to open the book "Saga" halfway through, but I also lost what I was best at.
I wanted to try a new way of writing, so I sent it.
In the beginning, the protagonist was written as someone who was against everything and the world, which looked cool.
But later, when I put myself in the reader's perspective, I found that this kind of protagonist is not very likable, or rather, very unlikable.
So I quickly changed back to my familiar writing style.
This makes the first 35 chapters look quite disconnected from the rest of the chapters, but it can be considered a change from a death sentence to a suspended death sentence...
This book and the one about Saga encountered many obstacles, which might be the reason for the mediocre results.
Just like the old saying goes.
Only when people stumble, hit a wall, or suffer losses, can they learn something from the painful lessons.
I did learn a lot from these two books, which I can use in the next book.
That’s probably all I have to say…
See you in the new book, friends.
At this point, thank you to all readers for reading!
(End of this chapter)
After all, this is my first book on QRead, so I’ll just write a few words of thanks. Life needs some sense of ritual!
The early results of this book are pretty good.
My readers should be able to tell that I am a true fan of Mebius.
Because it's obvious, or is it obvious to me?
The protagonist's cheat code is to get rewards by killing monsters.
But in the content of chapters 23 to , even though there were monsters, I let the protagonist deliberately not kill them, but gave them to Xiao Meng to train.
This is contrary to the golden finger and is a fatal point.
Because I think Mebius is a growth-type Ao, his strength is not achieved overnight, but gradually.
If the protagonist had cleared all the enemies, Xiao Meng would not have been able to achieve the subsequent achievements.
There is no way his bond with GUYS could be that deep.
The previous part about Mebius is about feeling good about yourself.
However, after more than 30 chapters, when the Mebius storyline was over, the transitional plot of returning to the Kingdom of Light was not well written.
Or maybe the anticipation was gone, so I ended up writing it poorly.
This resulted in the data being halved within a week.
Reflected in terms of income, it means a full one-third reduction...!
----------
The subsequent writing was actually quite smooth, and I kept writing along the main line I had thought of before.
I have been learning continuously in the meantime, so friends who have been following it should be able to feel it clearly.
The writing style of the content from 40 to 100 is obviously different from that of 1 to 40.
But as I was learning, I lost some of my own things, and the process was not as fun as what I wrote before. This is a very profound lesson.
And I also suffered from the literary youth syndrome. In a sense, I was quite satisfied with the two chapters I wrote about Xiao Meng's theory of longevity.
Is it considered making dumplings just for this plate of vinegar?
But judging from the data, people don’t really like this style of writing.
Also, chapters 38 and 39, the two chapters about Torrekia, are also full of literary youth syndrome.
So I won’t write this kind of article anymore, and just write about what I’m good at.
Then... in Chapter 100, it's time to look for the Eternal Core and start writing the story of the world of Triga.
But I haven’t seen Triga, why?
It was so awkward that I couldn't bear to watch it anymore. I was overwhelmed by the awkwardness after watching the second episode.
So I forced myself to finish watching Triga, and also watched a lot of videos complaining about the plot of Triga.
I made my second mistake here. I brought my emotions into the book.
Criticizing Smailu, Criticizing Jian Wu, Criticizing the embarrassing plot, etc...
Although Triga is OK, Triga is really not OK.
(Kusiya Naoki's pure GZZ, the script is not as good as the suit actors, it's amazing.)
As a result, the content of chapters 101 to 108 does not seem to be written by the same person as the previous ones. I have to express my feelings, but it is a pity for the readers.
To put it bluntly, everyone is watching you interact with the mysterious four Olympians or popular characters.
I want to see you defeat all your enemies and travel around the world.
I'm not looking at you complaining here.
I have already complained about it in my mind, or I have seen it in the video, so there is no point.
The pace of society today is very fast, everyone is under a lot of pressure, and the burden on their shoulders is not light.
Reading novels is to release stress and gain emotional value, rather than adding to one's irritability.
So... in the Triga chapter, half of the readers were poisoned again, and the writing failed for the second time.
(But the good news in the bad news is that the Triga chapter in the other book is going very smoothly...)
----------
Originally, I could have written this book for another month, but now that the data has hit rock bottom, I have lost motivation.
So let’s just end it. The ending was thought of a long time ago, but a lot of the story lines in the middle were omitted.
For example, the legendary enemies that Cyrus defeated in the Dark Lucifer Universe.
Each one of them could be used to write a 3-5 chapter story, but I just let Cyrus kill them instantly.
I planned the length of the chapters according to the improvement in strength. These enemies are all opponents at the "legendary" level.
According to the original outline, it is impossible for the ending to be just defeating Arc Belia, so...
I personally feel very sorry.
I used a small account to open the book "Saga" halfway through, but I also lost what I was best at.
I wanted to try a new way of writing, so I sent it.
In the beginning, the protagonist was written as someone who was against everything and the world, which looked cool.
But later, when I put myself in the reader's perspective, I found that this kind of protagonist is not very likable, or rather, very unlikable.
So I quickly changed back to my familiar writing style.
This makes the first 35 chapters look quite disconnected from the rest of the chapters, but it can be considered a change from a death sentence to a suspended death sentence...
This book and the one about Saga encountered many obstacles, which might be the reason for the mediocre results.
Just like the old saying goes.
Only when people stumble, hit a wall, or suffer losses, can they learn something from the painful lessons.
I did learn a lot from these two books, which I can use in the next book.
That’s probably all I have to say…
See you in the new book, friends.
At this point, thank you to all readers for reading!
(End of this chapter)
